This is the final version of my review:
What I've Changed:
- I have added the photo in place of the blank box. I like the image because it doesn't give too much away, though this doesn't really matter because the review does anywhere, but you can see that the film is clearly going to be about a couple.
- I have rearranged the synopsis at the bottom just to make it fit the shape of the box more than it previously did.
- As well as this I have also made some slight changes to my review after getting some feedback from my teacher. You can see this in a previous post.
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