This is now the next draft of the cover:
I changed the shade of pink used on the cover and decided to change the title to pink with a black outline as it stands out more than the original title of orange, outlined with pink, since more people from my questionnaire didn't think this stood out. I added a header, and footer of orange, to keep in with the colour scheme and added a yellow arrow with ‘POSTER PERFECTION’on it, which is often used in other pop magazines. I kept the layout of the magazine cover the same as my first draft so far because most people who answered my questionnaire liked this.
I finish my cover page and add my photos I will keep updating the progess.